[IMP] better texts

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Fabien Pinckaers
2013-10-04 22:52:19 +02:00
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<li data-value="/website/static/src/img/banner/velour.jpg"><a>Velour</a></li>
<li data-value="/website/static/src/img/banner/wood.jpg"><a>Wood</a></li>
<li data-value="/website/static/src/img/banner/yellow_green.jpg"><a>Yellow Green</a></li>
<li class="divider"></li>
<li class="oe_custom_bg"><a><b>Chose your picture</b></a></li>
</ul>
</li>
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<div class="col-md-6 mt32">
<h3>A Section Subtitle</h3>
<p>
Make every employee feel more connected and engaged
with twitter-like features for your own company. Follow
people, share best practices, 'like' top ideas, etc.
Write one or two paragraphs describing your product or
services. To be successful your content needs to be
useful to your readers.
</p><p>
Connect with experts, follow what interests you, share
documents and promote best practices with OpenERP
Social application. Get work done with effective
collaboration across departments, geographies
and business applications.
Start with the customer – find out what they want
and give it to them.
</p>
</div>
<div class="col-md-6 mt16 mb16">
@@ -130,14 +128,12 @@
<div class="col-md-6 mt32">
<h3>A Section Subtitle</h3>
<p>
OpenERP's Point of Sale introduces a super clean
interface with no installation required that runs
online and offline on modern hardwares.
Write one or two paragraphs describing your product,
services or a specific feature. To be successful
your content needs to be useful to your readers.
</p><p>
It's full integration with the company inventory
and accounting, gives you real time statistics and
consolidations amongst all shops without the hassle
of integrating several applications.
Start with the customer – find out what they want
and give it to them.
</p>
</div>
</div>
@@ -155,7 +151,7 @@
<div class="container">
<h1>Sell Online. Easily.</h1>
<p>
Get your online shop ready in a few clicks with OpenERP Commerce.
Write one sentence to convince visitor about your message.
</p>
<p>
<a class="btn btn-primary btn-lg" href="/website.contactus">
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<h2>
A Great Title
</h2>
<h3 class="text-muted">A good subtitle. Very good.</h3>
<h3 class="text-muted">A good subtitle. A very good one.</h3>
</div>
<div class="col-md-12 mb16 mt16">
<p>
OpenERP's <b>collaborative and realtime</b> project
management helps your team get work done. Keep
track of everything, from the big picture to the
minute details, from the customer contract to the
billing.
A great way to catch reader's attention is to tell a story.
Everything you consider writing can be told as a story.
</p><p>
Organize projects around <b>your own processes</b>. Work
on tasks and issues using the kanban view, schedule
tasks using the gantt chart and control deadlines
in the calendar view. Every project may have it's
own stages allowing teams to optimize their job.
<b>Great stories have personality</b>. Personality
connected to your person. This shows up in small
quirks like word choices or phrases. Write as you
write, not as someone else would write.
</p><p>
<b>Great stories are for everyone when written for
just one</b>. If you try to write with a wide general
audience in mind, your story will ring false. It
will be bland. No one will be interested. Write for
one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s
genuine for the rest.
</p>
</div>
</div>