diff --git a/addons/website/views/snippets.xml b/addons/website/views/snippets.xml index fc20663ed80..3f5a7ecd864 100644 --- a/addons/website/views/snippets.xml +++ b/addons/website/views/snippets.xml @@ -40,6 +40,7 @@
  • Velour
  • Wood
  • Yellow Green
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    A Section Subtitle

    - Make every employee feel more connected and engaged - with twitter-like features for your own company. Follow - people, share best practices, 'like' top ideas, etc. + Write one or two paragraphs describing your product or + services. To be successful your content needs to be + useful to your readers.

    - Connect with experts, follow what interests you, share - documents and promote best practices with OpenERP - Social application. Get work done with effective - collaboration across departments, geographies - and business applications. + Start with the customer – find out what they want + and give it to them.

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    A Section Subtitle

    - OpenERP's Point of Sale introduces a super clean - interface with no installation required that runs - online and offline on modern hardwares. + Write one or two paragraphs describing your product, + services or a specific feature. To be successful + your content needs to be useful to your readers.

    - It's full integration with the company inventory - and accounting, gives you real time statistics and - consolidations amongst all shops without the hassle - of integrating several applications. + Start with the customer – find out what they want + and give it to them.

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    Sell Online. Easily.

    - Get your online shop ready in a few clicks with OpenERP Commerce. + Write one sentence to convince visitor about your message.

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    A Great Title

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    A good subtitle. Very good.

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    A good subtitle. A very good one.

    - OpenERP's collaborative and realtime project - management helps your team get work done. Keep - track of everything, from the big picture to the - minute details, from the customer contract to the - billing. + A great way to catch reader's attention is to tell a story. + Everything you consider writing can be told as a story.

    - Organize projects around your own processes. Work - on tasks and issues using the kanban view, schedule - tasks using the gantt chart and control deadlines - in the calendar view. Every project may have it's - own stages allowing teams to optimize their job. + Great stories have personality. Personality + connected to your person. This shows up in small + quirks like word choices or phrases. Write as you + write, not as someone else would write. +

    + Great stories are for everyone when written for + just one. If you try to write with a wide general + audience in mind, your story will ring false. It + will be bland. No one will be interested. Write for + one person. If it’s genuine for the one, it’s + genuine for the rest.